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Gay

A bunch of terrible sprites that were recycled repeatedly throughout the flash with an overbearing theme of anime gayness? No thank you. The only reason I gave you five out of ten as opposed to a fat zero was because of your taste in music. Which is also why I'm afraid that people aren't exactly judging your flash for what it is. They only listen to the amazing beats from Junior Senior and immediately give this flash a ten. Definitely gayed.

rtil responds:

wow haha. well all i can say is that i hardly repeated any drawings, there are over 900 symbols in this 3-minute cartoon.

Just a Little Less Retarded

This flash definitely wasn't that great, although it was definitely better than its predecessor. At least this flash didn't have a stupid song that had nothing to do with the NG portal playing in the background. I do think, though, that you re-he-heeeaally need to get off of the tween fixation. You should also have sound effects added to fight scenes. We're not living in the 1960s anymore, and videos definitely have sound. Also, you overused the same flash image. There was no variation in shape or texture. And I'm also pretty sure that flash file icons don't bend at the bottom. It looked like every flash in your movie had back issues.

This flash, by all means, was pretty good, and compared to most other junk probably deserved front page, but it still wasn't that great.

M4KBOT responds:

I'm sorry that my copious amounts of tweens offended you.

THIS Got FRONT PAGE?!

Newgrounds voters are getting really... REALLY lax, man. Seriously. This flash is ENTIRELY comprised of flash effects, with no animation to speak of... at all. And as I watched this flash and tried to make sense of the stupidity that was being displayed on the screen, I realized that this guy has absolutely no idea what he's going on about! Dreams aren't something that don't have a beginning or an end, and dreams aren't some kind of spiritual experience either. All dreams are, is the subconsious firing images into our mind during sleep.

Well I suppose I should actually talk about why this flash sucked eggs in general, then. Like I said before, there is NO animation. Just tweens, tweens, and more tweens. Maybe some cutting and pasting here or there, but mostly it was just tweens. The music was just a paino in the background, there was no plot, there was no logical order to speak of. Seriously, if you had turned this in as some kind of project, it would have been graded poorly at BEST. A lot of the images in this flash were simply cut and pasted in from your FORMER works, so barely any of this flash was drawn anyway. You must not have learned much about animation during the past, what, SIX things you've submitted to the portal, because this doesn't show me much talent. I'd much rather see a flash that was tween'ed, but still had a decent plot and movement as though the animation was thought through. This only proves my point, though, that FBF animation is the end-all of flash animation. Heck, my FIRST flash that I created was better than this, and people said that IT was horrible. My advice to you THIS time around, man: actually put some time and effort into your flashes. Then when you DO get portal awards, then at least you'll deserve 'em.

Tenkiboi responds:

I am definitely glad that there are reviewers in Newgrounds that are critical. It will leave room for me to improve. From all the reviews that I read from you gives me a valid point to remake the series. Once I graduate from film school, I will remake the series with a well developed plot and an animation that will pass your expectations. Thanks for the comments.

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