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THIS Got FRONT PAGE?!

Newgrounds voters are getting really... REALLY lax, man. Seriously. This flash is ENTIRELY comprised of flash effects, with no animation to speak of... at all. And as I watched this flash and tried to make sense of the stupidity that was being displayed on the screen, I realized that this guy has absolutely no idea what he's going on about! Dreams aren't something that don't have a beginning or an end, and dreams aren't some kind of spiritual experience either. All dreams are, is the subconsious firing images into our mind during sleep.

Well I suppose I should actually talk about why this flash sucked eggs in general, then. Like I said before, there is NO animation. Just tweens, tweens, and more tweens. Maybe some cutting and pasting here or there, but mostly it was just tweens. The music was just a paino in the background, there was no plot, there was no logical order to speak of. Seriously, if you had turned this in as some kind of project, it would have been graded poorly at BEST. A lot of the images in this flash were simply cut and pasted in from your FORMER works, so barely any of this flash was drawn anyway. You must not have learned much about animation during the past, what, SIX things you've submitted to the portal, because this doesn't show me much talent. I'd much rather see a flash that was tween'ed, but still had a decent plot and movement as though the animation was thought through. This only proves my point, though, that FBF animation is the end-all of flash animation. Heck, my FIRST flash that I created was better than this, and people said that IT was horrible. My advice to you THIS time around, man: actually put some time and effort into your flashes. Then when you DO get portal awards, then at least you'll deserve 'em.

Tenkiboi responds:

I am definitely glad that there are reviewers in Newgrounds that are critical. It will leave room for me to improve. From all the reviews that I read from you gives me a valid point to remake the series. Once I graduate from film school, I will remake the series with a well developed plot and an animation that will pass your expectations. Thanks for the comments.

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